I was thrilled
I was thrilled when I received this notice!
Your kind supports sustain me to move on. I’ll do my best to meet your interests.
Since I’m a first time writer to edit a book, there are a whole lot to learn . I’ll appreciate any kind of comments. From your comments I can learn about how to edit the story more readable. The mine idea to write “Everlasting Blossoms” is to let people to know once there was a woman who was pure, full of love: she love nature, love the people around her. With the flowers she crocheted shows her philosophy of life. How was she led into the art of needle works. Why was the first rose crocheted. And her last wish was let people know how to crochet flowers and butterflies with easy steps. You can crochet your own unique flowers and butterflies. Thus you can keep the beautiful spring at your house as long as you want to.
After the herbs were cooked, Yu Wen was ready to give to Syau Wen, she realized why the old doctor told her to dump the soup into the mouth. Because Syau Wen couldn’t open her mouth and swallow anything at all. With Dz Yun’s help to open Syau Wen’s mouth, Yu Wen put a spoon between her teeth and dumped the soup in her mouth slowly.
Both Dz Yun and Yu Wen sat right next to Syau Wen after all the soup were dumped. They watching at Syau Wen’s pale face without even winking their eyes. That one burning joss stick time seemed as a century long. Finally they saw Syau Wen’s nose tip start getting wet, Gradually they could even see some tiny water globs! Yu Wen was almost cry and shout out for joy, but quietly her tears running down like stream on hers cheeks. Dz Yun hugged her tightly and gently patted on her back.
After several follow up packs of Chinese herbals Syau Wen was recovered from that terrible diarrhea. Yu Wen wanted to thank that Heavenly given doctor who saved Syau Wen’s life. But that white hair white beard friendly kind old doctor was not there anymore. The neighbors told Yu Wen his son took him back home, because his son thought it is inappropriate for his old aged father live along so far away from home. Where was his hometown? No one knew it.
Yu Wen told her children later one, she often regret that she did not ask the old doctor for the prescription. Otherwise She could have helped saved some other baby’s life in the same case.
Within these first two years in Syay Wen’s life, she had much more tough days than those same aged children. Likewise Yu Wen had worked much more harder than the other mothers, more painstaking care to this immature birth child, a baby given by God. Yu Wen from an unexperience mother, step by step she grow up with Syau Wen. Every step was a surprise, a new discovery and joy. Together She grow up with Syau Wen who learning to sit up, crawling, tooth growing…….
Yu Wen, a girl from a wealthy royal family, knowing nothing about child care and cooking. Gradually with the experience piled up day by day, she grew up together with her children.
— C7 Visiting Dz Yun’s Parents is on it’s way–